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The Dragon of Akiyame

Author: Makashima
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Read The Dragon of Akiyame novel written by the author Makashima on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Fantasy stories, covering action, romance, adventure, magic, sliceoflife. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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Musashi Akiyame was a teenager that wanted to live his normal school Life until the past of his family was reaching out to him. A shadow was following him that he can't escape. He must face his past and even reach out to abnormal powers that are forgotten by this world. Will he achieve Peace in this World? Or will Valyria fall under The Dragonborn. Find out and follow this exciting adventure through a World full of magic, mysterious creatures, Legends and the Realms.

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New version is in my list of books. "Men in our family never age passed thirty" August's father said at the dinner table. The fifteen year old looked up to see his brother enjoying a meal like he hadn't heard their father's words. "I'm not going to die at thirty. Never," Gregory, his brother, solemnly promised as they poured dust over their father's grave. Despite all plans set in motion, Gregory dies, leaving the family business to August. A part of his will states he's found a cure; a young human girl named Kelly Richardson. Kelly is beyond shocked when the unpopular billionaire, August Cline, shows up the same day her mother dies. He offers her a tempting deal to be his in-house guinea pig. Mysteries surrounding her mother's death and the mountains of debts and loans crashing on her, Kelly accepts. She will now spends her days navigating an eccentric billionaire, his animus nephew and the butler who sees all; while solving the mystery of the estranged Aunt Davi's return Not to mention, what was the deal with their red eyes? Excerpt: "It's a beautiful piece," Kelly froze. This gallery was too large for them to run into each other. She wasn't ready. She couldn't face him. "Is it yours?" "What?" She turned on instinct and met with striking grey eyes. His jet black hair went just over his temples, and the rest of it stayed below his ears. His strong brows drew together in a frown, "Are you alright?" Alright? No. She was facing the man who brutally murdered her mother, how could she possibly be alright? Art is not mine *** Art is not mine!

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Story development is hooking. Although the pace is slow I still wanted to read on and see what was happening. What I think you need to work on is descriptions. I couldn't picture the school classroom in my mind. When you're describing, talk about everything. It's the reader's mental picture that helps us understand what's going on. Also character design can be worked on. Apart from the main character, I couldn't really see any unique characteristics of other people. Writing quality is nice. Keep it up. Your idea is unique and that's the beauty of WN

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I like the concept and idea of the story, but it is almost impossible to read. Punctuation is a mess. Events and interactions are a mess. There are tons of references to characters that were never introduced. Well, at least it helps to ignore the forced logic behind MC's actions. The way the author tells the story gives you cringe vibes; it's like reading the thoughts of a teenager, who gets easily distracted by literally anything while never having a meaningful or coherent line of thought. A novel could become two times better if only the author used some Microsoft Word software to check for obvious mistakes.

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Very interesting story and nice writer (: .

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