Review Detail of Elixer_Yuu in Vampire Highschool Highschool

First things first, there are a lot of punctuation errors which made me read the lines more than once, breaking the immersion. There are minor grammatical mistakes too but they can be overlooked. Another thing that bothered me was the conversations. In writing, the first letter of a sentence should always capitalised but this book does it otherwise. It bothered me to no end but well, maybe that's just me. As for the story, it has potential to be really good or maybe even better but because of above mentioned reasons, it didn't manage to hook me in. And please change the synopsis. It is very confusing. But hey, this is all a subjective opinion so fight on, author! (Congrats on getting contracted!!! 🎉🎉🎉🎉)