Elixer_Yuu
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Elixer_Yuu1yrCommentedwell... we all want to...
'I want to start over.'- Elixer_Yuu1yrCommented
ofc... truck kun supremacy
From his side mirror, an older black truck appeared from nowhere and collided with Leo's canned beer delivery truck, landing a fatal blow! - Elixer_Yuu1yrCommented
This hit close to me on an atomic level
Leo can't help but think how nice it would be to be able to not worry about rent so late into the summer, and have a beauty or two by your side. - Elixer_Yuu1yrReplied to Tunic01
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- Elixer_Yuu1yrReplied to NovaEre
Basically, MC has transmigrated into another body. And about the regression, previously, MC could only remember, or rather, feel that he has regressed but other than that fact, he was a normal human with a newborn's mind. Maybe the only thing that made him a bit different would be his abnormal mental growth and indifference. But now, after transmigration, he can now regress with all the memories. Hope that it was helpful... (thank god we can copy-paste things)
Ch 3 New World (2) - Elixer_Yuu1yrReplied to Animated_Youtuber
Basically, MC has transmigrated into another body. And about the regression, previously, MC could only remember, or rather, feel that he has regressed but other than that fact, he was a normal human with a newborn's mind. Maybe the only thing that made him a bit different would be his abnormal mental growth and indifference. But now, after transmigration, he can now regress with all the memories. Hope that it was helpful.
Ch 3 New World (2) - Elixer_Yuu1yrReplied to NovaEre
well, MC's mind was not working properly
I didn't even know what he was talking about in the first place. Forest of Death? Was that where this body died? - Elixer_Yuu1yrPosted
First things first, there are a lot of punctuation errors which made me read the lines more than once, breaking the immersion. There are minor grammatical mistakes too but they can be overlooked. Another thing that bothered me was the conversations. In writing, the first letter of a sentence should always capitalised but this book does it otherwise. It bothered me to no end but well, maybe that's just me. As for the story, it has potential to be really good or maybe even better but because of above mentioned reasons, it didn't manage to hook me in. And please change the synopsis. It is very confusing. But hey, this is all a subjective opinion so fight on, author! (Congrats on getting contracted!!! 🎉🎉🎉🎉)
- Elixer_Yuu1yrReplied to NovaEre
ik, frickin trash
"I told you to never show those tears in front of me, you bitch! You don't even have any talent, and you dare cry in front of me?! GET OUT OF MY SIGHT!" - Elixer_Yuu1yrReplied to Oglan
hey, thanks for notifying me about it
This paragraph has been deleted. - Elixer_Yuu1yrReplied to Kuraim
when tho?
Death was nothing to me. Of course, that didn't mean I liked pain. I was a human too. The deaths I had been through were all painless and instant. - Elixer_Yuu1yrReplied to Qherxil
ahem... don't spoil plz... lol
"Yes. Gods that we had read and worshipped on Earth and the Demons we know about. They were real. Like the God of Destruction from the Vedas, Shiva. The Ruler of the Underworld from the Greek Mythology, Hades. Demons like Asmodeus and Baal and such. All of them exist in the Tower." - Elixer_Yuu1yrReplied to Aaron_Aguilera_2568