Review Detail of DaoistSwiftGull in The Damned Demon

When you are in any vehicle and are going along a highway and you let down the window, The fresh air is just amazing and refreshing, similarly among all the other novels out there in WebNovel currently it gives a similar feeling. Some great points are the much better plot development, clearly planned novel, well fleshed characters. Now some of the cliched points are we all know how MC's journey is going to end, lets hope there is a surprise there ( i.e; Not by constantly nerfing the MC), a bit more of plot twists, could lead to a great plot. Another problem is that all side characters have only one goal that is always to either harm the MC or harm the Female Lead. If instead of that each of them had their own aspirations and goals, it would make a quantitative leap in quality. Not that no one should target the MC or fight against him, but more like the MC should be a variable in their pre-planned calculations and maybe how they would deal with it would be fascinating eg:( Maybe making him lose favor and many other things, which I am sure you could think of which I could not.), Would make it more real. Another trope is that always the 'World of Demons', in all novels is paid little attention considering that is just a place where it is Anarchic or Absolutist, so I am guessing a lot of author just gloss over the world building instead if more attention was paid to the world too and its minor little characters, I am sure something can be written too( not info dumps but here and there some developments_ it could make it much more interesting to read, a more apt distinction of places also maybe adding a little map for the readers could make it more interesting too. I just feel sometimes some tiny incidents can lead to everlasting impacts that can lead to character development. Sometimes the smaller things lead to the biggest impacts, because they last sometimes longer than most. Considering the cheat if instead of blindly trusting and using it, If he was suspicious of it, It would be much better, not saying to be paranoid about using it, that he stops using it, but being a bit suspicious would not be harmful but instead lead to more points for plot development and also a bit of mystery. Another point ^_^ In my opinion, instead of Hellbringer, Archfiend sounds much more of a suitable name to the MC, reason being his personality resonates with the word . Not a big thing, but instead of Ring of Damnation what about Ring of Perdition ?(Meaning: The ring would bring utter ruin to those who it condemns, basically makes people suffer from eternal damnation in hell) In the end a great job in the novel, a lot of improvements in many aspects, but I am really expectant about this novel, Nothing bad intended, Just want to see the novel reach greater heights maybe a new classic, of the genre !