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  • DaoistSwiftGull
    DaoistSwiftGull1yr
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    When you are in any vehicle and are going along a highway and you let down the window, The fresh air is just amazing and refreshing, similarly among all the other novels out there in WebNovel currently it gives a similar feeling. Some great points are the much better plot development, clearly planned novel, well fleshed characters. Now some of the cliched points are we all know how MC's journey is going to end, lets hope there is a surprise there ( i.e; Not by constantly nerfing the MC), a bit more of plot twists, could lead to a great plot. Another problem is that all side characters have only one goal that is always to either harm the MC or harm the Female Lead. If instead of that each of them had their own aspirations and goals, it would make a quantitative leap in quality. Not that no one should target the MC or fight against him, but more like the MC should be a variable in their pre-planned calculations and maybe how they would deal with it would be fascinating eg:( Maybe making him lose favor and many other things, which I am sure you could think of which I could not.), Would make it more real. Another trope is that always the 'World of Demons', in all novels is paid little attention considering that is just a place where it is Anarchic or Absolutist, so I am guessing a lot of author just gloss over the world building instead if more attention was paid to the world too and its minor little characters, I am sure something can be written too( not info dumps but here and there some developments_ it could make it much more interesting to read, a more apt distinction of places also maybe adding a little map for the readers could make it more interesting too. I just feel sometimes some tiny incidents can lead to everlasting impacts that can lead to character development. Sometimes the smaller things lead to the biggest impacts, because they last sometimes longer than most. Considering the cheat if instead of blindly trusting and using it, If he was suspicious of it, It would be much better, not saying to be paranoid about using it, that he stops using it, but being a bit suspicious would not be harmful but instead lead to more points for plot development and also a bit of mystery. Another point ^_^ In my opinion, instead of Hellbringer, Archfiend sounds much more of a suitable name to the MC, reason being his personality resonates with the word . Not a big thing, but instead of Ring of Damnation what about Ring of Perdition ?(Meaning: The ring would bring utter ruin to those who it condemns, basically makes people suffer from eternal damnation in hell) In the end a great job in the novel, a lot of improvements in many aspects, but I am really expectant about this novel, Nothing bad intended, Just want to see the novel reach greater heights maybe a new classic, of the genre !

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    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy · Resurgent
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  • DaoistSwiftGull
    DaoistSwiftGull2yr
    Replied to Blanket

    I think Geneticist suits him the most

    Ch 657 Immense Frustration
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    The Oracle Paths
    Sci-fi · Arkinslize
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  • DaoistSwiftGull
    DaoistSwiftGull2yr
    Replied to Never_the_Less

    But what about Geneticist that could let him replace his bloodline ? and possibly upgrade it too

    Ch 657 Immense Frustration
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    The Oracle Paths
    Sci-fi · Arkinslize
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  • DaoistSwiftGull
    DaoistSwiftGull2yr
    Replied to Rikxx

    Same here bro they sound cool too xD. but maybe Geneticist also as that could potentially change/upgrade his bloodline at least that's what his master mentioned that Bloodline could be upgraded artificially that would be a good choice in my opinion

    Ch 657 Immense Frustration
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    The Oracle Paths
    Sci-fi · Arkinslize
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  • DaoistSwiftGull
    DaoistSwiftGull2yr
    Commented

    My guess would be Geneticist, Paragon, or like most people are mentioning Myratharian or even Sunlord maybe . but I am curious too what is a Designer ? As mentioned in Tier 5.

    Ch 657 Immense Frustration
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    The Oracle Paths
    Sci-fi · Arkinslize
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  • DaoistSwiftGull
    DaoistSwiftGull2yr
    Commented

    I thought the names such as Sunlord, Paragon, Geneticist , Warmage sounded cool but Harbringer of Chaos was on another level . In my opinion Immortal would be a truly good class . because at the end no powerful you are if you are killed all ends , but if you are immortal or can heal from almost anything then well that is a benefit anyone would die for tbh. Even in the earlier chapters , his master mentioned about this being invaluable .

    Ch 656 Soul Class Tier
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    The Oracle Paths
    Sci-fi · Arkinslize
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  • DaoistSwiftGull
    DaoistSwiftGull2yr
    Commented

    A legend truly Author. You made me your fan. The novel was wonderful and the translations were top-notch. No complaints. The end made me sad, because at the end the one true friend was Sun Wukong, he never gave up on Su-Hyuen.

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  • DaoistSwiftGull
    DaoistSwiftGull2yr
    Commented

    the chapter was great but considering how hyped the One Overlord was. It quite doesn't match up to the power even considering the fact that Su-Hyeun has grown stronger. and also the fact that the Demon Bull King's power being exaggerated to a point where it's just impossible to know how he got so strong. That's my opinion atleast. At this point I am just laughing this novel had a Late Romance/Slow Romance tag on it, but not even a single character to whom he could be inclined towards

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  • DaoistSwiftGull
    DaoistSwiftGull2yr
    Commented

    AS @Lewis_Lannagan mentioned the chapters are getting filled with fillers and also considering Jake's initial goals were to prioritize self development, we see everyone entering a stage where they are stronger than Jake , even if they joined the Oracle for 3 days or for 1 day they all finish their Ordeals faster than at least Jake did. and well at this point Jake might just become a Side Character, who provides boosts to everyone around him. ( I am mentioning this considering that the initial goals were always to develop strength(individual ) first and then others but at this point it is more similar to whatever enemies will be strong so let them beat me and go. I will just provide boosts to them similar to Tim in this scenario. I am not mentioning that make Jake OP in every fight but at least with the ones who are relatively newer should get better explanations on how everything overpowers Jake regardless of how he grows. That's my only suggestion if you could just explain that a bit better , and not drag out the chapters ( which did not occur earlier )

    Ch 640 Oracle Capital
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    The Oracle Paths
    Sci-fi · Arkinslize
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  • DaoistSwiftGull
    DaoistSwiftGull2yr
    Replied to daedpool18888

    Well I agree to your opinion till chapter 1300-1350 . After forceful antagonists was just a waste. The author could have just worked on the idea of technological development and then subjugate and change other people

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    I'm the King Of Technology
    Fantasy · lumydee
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  • DaoistSwiftGull
    DaoistSwiftGull2yr
    Posted

    To just say the novel is great is an understatement in itself, it nothing less than a gem in Webnovel. In the beginning it might be that seeing the main character behave and direct his actions as a coward would and not an MC, would cause people to drop the book. That's the place where many others drag on that characteristics of the MC which one wouldn't like to see from a fantasy novel, but that is where @Arkinslize differs from others, all actions and words or even slight gestures all have a play in the future of how it would work. The idea on the which the novel is based till date is unique too! It doesn't plagiarize any cliched trope/even story arcs. There is no forced love , or any theme where I see anyone and he becomes my brother for life and they can never leave me or betray me. The novel is realistic and focuses on character development. The greatest plus point for me was the fact that the novel has a suspense element and is unpredictable so it doesn't allow anyone to guess what is about to happen, it is sudden and is exciting just like watching a film. Though the novel has hardly anything that one could even change, as it would probably change the way people thought, but I would like to add a suggestion, which the author might even find unappealing:- 1) My suggestion one is taht could we have shorter chapters for the Ordeals. 2) Many times a lot of things eg: (powerups, certain special skills, abilities,people) are attributed towards higher ordeals, thought the fact that the people arrived on the planet almost at the same time. Maybe other reasons could be used to explain the theory. 3) Maybe a bit less on description in some chapters? These suggestions would personally make this novel even better in my opinion

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    The Oracle Paths
    Sci-fi · Arkinslize
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  • DaoistSwiftGull
    DaoistSwiftGull2yr
    Posted

    I would agree that in the beginning 200 or so chapters the novels was going in a weird direction, no one could predict what would happen , and we all assumed it to be a cliched trope novel ( which we mostly get in Koran novels , with many to mention , I won't list them but we all know the ones with the Hero complex novels how they go ) , but as we move on the author improves the story ,clears up many unexplained sections and we get a fair idea and understanding what happened earlier ,and what's going on and action, fantasy all start improving drastically, and all chapters leave behind a yearning to see what happens in the future because in this novel there is no predictability and that creates suspense which the author proves in his writing. It might be hard for people to read this, that iswho judge novels on their beginnings and read and decide to drop or continue but I still ask everyone to atleast persist till the 250's after that if it is not to your liking or you feel it is not something which interests you can drop it immediately. Thanks to the Translator for picking up this novel, excellent translation and updates but I would wish we get 2 chaps a day instead of one , not a complaint but just a suggestion, and in some earlier chapters if the dialogues/exchanges between MC ,villains and characters could be corrected a bit ( in the sense that who says what in which dialogue, is pretty confusing in the earlier chapters. but later on much better ). Thanks again,

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  • DaoistSwiftGull
    DaoistSwiftGull2yr
    Replied to raven_returns

    but agreeable

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    Primordial Dimensions
    Fantasy · HideousGrain
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  • DaoistSwiftGull
    DaoistSwiftGull2yr
    Replied to raven_returns

    I think the author wanted to add a touch of realism to it .

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    Primordial Dimensions
    Fantasy · HideousGrain
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  • DaoistSwiftGull
    DaoistSwiftGull2yr
    Posted

    I think to explain this novel . It would be a author who has done his research and considers many different factors while writing a story which many other authors don't consider while writing. Some have a good plot and story but end up with a messed up number of chapters either to create fillers. But this novel redefines the concept of how Sci - FI novels with reasonable cheats should be written so that the reader can appreciate the story and not feel a cliché story every 50 chaps. This novels makes different situations and different skills which are used for variety of reasons. Another is that in each "GAME" the world development , character interaction are just top notch. If you want to try reading novels with game, cheats which can be comprehended by rational minds then read this.

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    48 Hours a Day
    Sci-fi · Little Bleary Zhao
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  • DaoistSwiftGull
    DaoistSwiftGull2yr
    Commented

    I always like the POV's of even the side characters in the story. It makes it more interesting to read.

    Please... Save us all.'
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    I'm the King Of Technology
    Fantasy · lumydee
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  • DaoistSwiftGull
    DaoistSwiftGull2yr
    Commented

    To be honest Ling Long is one of the most OP pets seen in any game based novel. One has to admit that none beats it but lets see how it gets beaten up.

    The skill Ling Long had just used was Explosive Fist. This skill increased her base attack power by 200% and had a 100% chance of interrupting skills or magic spells. In addition, it also had a 100% chance of sending the enemy flying, so even the terrifying Abyssal Dragon fell helplessly before the little dragon.
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    Samsara Online
    Games · XIETIAN
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