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TrueDawn
TrueDawnAuthor1yrTrueDawn

It's been three months since I've started writing this novel, so now I can tell you more things in this review with greater certainty. Right off the bat, I'm sure you'll notice that this novel's MC is in a similar setting as the one from TLM, being an NPC in a game world. However, that's where the similarities end. I won't tell you much about the entire story, but I can assure you that you won't be disappointed once you pick it up, especially now that I've gotten feedback from you readers, allowing me to polish this story to the next level. To those who are about to start reading the novel, and to those who have stuck with me since the beginning, we're all in for a wild ride. I hope all of you stick with me till the end.

MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith

TrueDawn

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darkanitmage
darkanitmageLv15darkanitmage

1 last question do u have -----------------‐-------------- in the story bc thay get Annoying when u listening to it

TrueDawn:at first, he acts dumb and becomes incredibly idiotic in his actions, though at some point he changes. I'll be changing the beginning part to reflect a different personality in the future, but for now, that's how he is.
LushLag
LushLagLv15LushLag

any romance?

TrueDawn
TrueDawnAuthorTrueDawn

none as of yet

LushLag:any romance?
Skyfail
SkyfailLv15Skyfail

Kinda hope it stays this way. Web novels without romance are either rare or I'm just looking in the wrong place. But tbh as long as it won't become a harem I don't mind either way.

TrueDawn:none as of yet
TrueDawn
TrueDawnAuthorTrueDawn

at the very least, i can assure you that there will be no harem.

Skyfail:Kinda hope it stays this way. Web novels without romance are either rare or I'm just looking in the wrong place. But tbh as long as it won't become a harem I don't mind either way.
Arco
ArcoLv4Arco

No Harem Yes Romance, however if u are not feeling confidence in doing it, dont do it, It would a great novel

TrueDawn:at the very least, i can assure you that there will be no harem.
Nelswyk
NelswykLv14Nelswyk

I hope that there will be some romance (not harem). Otherwise a big part of his humanness will be missing.

TrueDawn:at the very least, i can assure you that there will be no harem.
Arkanghelik_Prince
Arkanghelik_PrinceLv3Arkanghelik_Prince

yeah, even if it's with the characters having a bit of troubles with their feelings for each other. 💖

Nelswyk:I hope that there will be some romance (not harem). Otherwise a big part of his humanness will be missing.
darkanitmage
darkanitmageLv15darkanitmage

is the mc a smart one or a dumb one or a Logic one

TrueDawn
TrueDawnAuthorTrueDawn

at first, he acts dumb and becomes incredibly idiotic in his actions, though at some point he changes. I'll be changing the beginning part to reflect a different personality in the future, but for now, that's how he is.

darkanitmage:is the mc a smart one or a dumb one or a Logic one
TrueDawn
TrueDawnAuthorTrueDawn

only used a few em dashes to separate the two, like 4 per side. hope that helps.

darkanitmage:1 last question do u have -----------------‐-------------- in the story bc thay get Annoying when u listening to it
Tsuika
TsuikaLv15Tsuika

I mean, all the crutch phrases is a big let down as a reader.

Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv13Romance_guy

Will he create any organization ?

TrueDawn:none as of yet
TrueDawn
TrueDawnAuthorTrueDawn

at some point, yes

Romance_guy:Will he create any organization ?