I will preface this by saying I am currently 170 chapters in at the time of writing this review. Pros: -The MC has noticeable character growth and is not immediately flawless. -The game system is interesting, complex enough to make you think about how you would go about it if you were to play the game simple enough to not be confusing. -Side characters while not entirely fleshed out feel consequential, and are not extremely tropey. -Each arc feels purposeful -Time skips at appropriate moments, no boring pass the time chapters -MC isn't a horndog simp Cons: -Never a real sense of threat to MC so far. -Time skips do not adequately address how much time has passes. (I got occasionally confused on how much time was left until beta launch) -Everything seems to go easily go MC's way. (This might be changing soon if foreshadowing is to be believed) -There are spots where it feels like nothing happens at a place if the MC is not currently there.(minor nitpick) TLDR: Finally a good Game Novel where the MC isn't out for revenge or just trying to build a harem. Grammar is at native speaker level. Story has a good progression speed, and there are only minor complaints I have if I really nitpick.
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