Review Detail of AlbaWolf in Changing Her Destiny After Being Reborn

Overall I think this story has good potential. I will admit that I’m not all that good at judging things like this. The only thing I dislike is that the progression of the story is a bit fast paced. Some like it slow, some like it fast, some like it in between. I usually like the middle ground, but that doesn’t mean I can’t appreciate a story that sounds good and has a decent start. My biggest hope is that the story won’t be dropped and will be completed—hopefully without a cliffhanger—and have the majority if not all questions answered toward the end. Though this is mainly if this story is by itself. I’ve found many stories are dropped or end on a cliffhanger and are no longer updated. If the author chooses one of these routes in the future, whether due to personal circumstances or lack of inspiration or motivation, I hope they can notify potential readers about it. This way, many don’t get too upset about the abrupt ending of a story. I am also glad to see that each character seems to have some personality and smarts. The only other thing I somewhat dislike, though perhaps I just didn’t notice before, is that I couldn’t quite figure out what kind of setting or time it was held in. Grammar-wise, it seems quite well written in that it is easy to read and keep up with. One doesn’t have to rack their brain if words or letters are crammed together or mixed up or even put in a random place or just absent. I understand that some may be learning English or have things like dyslexia or are simply having trouble with keeping up with the different meanings or word types to use such as nouns, verbs, and metaphors. I am really looking forward to the story when it gets up and running with more chapters. Thank you for your time in reading this and hope everyone has a good day/night.