This is my favorite chapter by far. Also, Allura really knows how to roast someone. I probably should’ve figured it out by now, but the ‘Executionor’ kills with words to. Thanks for the chapter!

Overall I think this story has good potential. I will admit that I’m not all that good at judging things like this. The only thing I dislike is that the progression of the story is a bit fast paced. Some like it slow, some like it fast, some like it in between. I usually like the middle ground, but that doesn’t mean I can’t appreciate a story that sounds good and has a decent start. My biggest hope is that the story won’t be dropped and will be completed—hopefully without a cliffhanger—and have the majority if not all questions answered toward the end. Though this is mainly if this story is by itself. I’ve found many stories are dropped or end on a cliffhanger and are no longer updated. If the author chooses one of these routes in the future, whether due to personal circumstances or lack of inspiration or motivation, I hope they can notify potential readers about it. This way, many don’t get too upset about the abrupt ending of a story. I am also glad to see that each character seems to have some personality and smarts. The only other thing I somewhat dislike, though perhaps I just didn’t notice before, is that I couldn’t quite figure out what kind of setting or time it was held in. Grammar-wise, it seems quite well written in that it is easy to read and keep up with. One doesn’t have to rack their brain if words or letters are crammed together or mixed up or even put in a random place or just absent. I understand that some may be learning English or have things like dyslexia or are simply having trouble with keeping up with the different meanings or word types to use such as nouns, verbs, and metaphors. I am really looking forward to the story when it gets up and running with more chapters. Thank you for your time in reading this and hope everyone has a good day/night.

I really love Mira! Also, let Mira save Dominique and make her better than ever before. I wanna see how long it takes for Mira to call herself Dominique’s mother :) Great job, dear author!

Only Danny

From themselves?

It could’ve been worse, much worse. I think it had at least a slight effect. Anyways, thanks for the chapter!

Technically, she’s quite intelligent; however, Aelina is someone more interested in personal gain or whatever really interests her. It’s likely that she figured that whole thing was aimed solely at Mira and those related strictly to her (as in, those Mira cares about). They hadn’t exactly done much, if anything at all to Aelina and the whole of her sect. I’d say the main reason she’s getting involved now is because A) they invaded HER territory, B) it would be a blow to the sect’s and Aelina’s reputation if she let them get away with this, C) it would probably be REALLY bad and make things worse for Mira if she showed too much ‘favoritism’ to a single disciple (remember, Aelina needs Mira for the herbs and the competition on the main continent in the future, and I think Aelina’s smart enough not to risk everyone on the continent coming after Mira like moth’s to a flame because of her treasures and because Aelina still needs her), and D) Aelina likely things a war would be fun, highly entertaining, would assist in training the disciples, and would provide the perfect opportunity to eradicate and plunder a sect (specifically the Crimson Slayer Sect), which would likely give a ‘decent’ amount of loot and treasures to Aelina and the sect when taking into consideration that the Crimson Slayer Sect has been around a while. Was my ‘essay’ good? I was actually trying to hit as many points as possible. I still love Aelina, but Mira is still in first place between the two, and likely always will be. Be worried not, dear author, Mira is my favorite character in this story by far. Thanks for the chapter!

We managed to get 500 power stones by the end of the week… Why weren’t the promised chapters given? Or was there something else?

I wonder what exactly would happen to a male? Also, my points gathering thing stopped gathering points yet again *sigh*.

I want some yuri, honestly. There’s not enough yuri in the world. I have quite the trouble finding yuri in my opinion. I don’t want to see the girl’s heart break, personally, and I don’t know what would happen to her mind if it did. I’m honestly not as worried about Tian. I shall always root for the girls here. Don’t get me wrong, it’s not quite that I dislike all the other types, it just feels like the most obvious cliche with a number of them. The endings with a number of books on many can certainly be determined. It can definitely happen with yuri too, I admit. As for the rest? Well, the girl usually ends up falling for the one or ones who harmed (emotionally, physically, and/or mentally), betrayed, or lied to her (the men, often the male lead or the multiple male partners) by the end. Once again, this can happen with the female partner(s) too. It’s just that most of the ones I find in relation to female love the male happens this way. Some I can’t stand to read, and I’ve gotten tired of reading a number of these, honestly. This is just PERSONAL opinion. I like the strong female leads and often try to find them. These can be found with a bit of time and effort, depending on where you go, though I often have trouble due to a lack of knowledge of where I can actually go to do so. Pointers would be much appreciated. I have long since strayed mostly to books with female leads, except for things like Wings of Fire, White Fang, Call of the Wild, The Savage Fortress, The Lost Hero, Spirit Animals, and a number of old favorites within male lead or switching leads that are either male or female. Though I admit there are some other male leads or straight books that I’ve read in current times. I also have my memory problems. Not the forgeting type (concerning books). I am on the constant search for new books to read due to my memory of being able to remember most of what has happened in a book that I’ve both liked and read. If anyone has any story/book suggestions, preferably not pure history, pure math, and such, even if they have male leads, straight, or whatever, I am open to them and will at least try to give it a shot. The broadest term my books usually fall under (in my opinion) is fantasy. Some, sometimes many, have a bit of realism. And, most importantly, and to those who may or may not do this to me or others, please don’t criticize my personal opinion as it just has to do with me and me alone. !!!AND TO THE AUTHOR!!! I honestly love this work you’ve done so far. Even if Shiro does turn up with the guy, I’ll stick right with the story to the end ’cause I think it’s an amazing work of art. Shiro is no doubt one of my top favorites compared to just about every book I’ve ever read so far. I love her personality and the way her words and actions make me laugh (her one particular habit is awesomely hilarious to me). I hope you find enough inspiration and willingness to continue this story to the end, as I’m very much sure I’m not the only one going to plan some torture (maybe even steal a certain habit) if you stupidly drop it and leave us torn and heartbroken with murderous revenge. I love this story. I love this brilliant and strong and hilarious character who makes me laugh and cry and willing to wage war right along side her. I believe you are an amazing author who puts in a lot of work, effort, and large amounts of time and brainpower to create and continue and (most hopefully, after a very long time, far into the future cause I want an unrealisticly never-ending story with such and epically legendary being known as Shiro) end it. I hope you and those you care for are doing alright and wish you a good day/good night’s rest. Cheers to all who have stayed with the story so far (you people are incredible in my eyes if you did), and death and eternal suffering to those who were unwilling to stay for such a wonderful work of art (I’ll mentally imagine a certain character of mine going after you if you did, and be warned, she is not to be trifled with).

+1

Yes. Yes! YESSS! I love how Ryu deals out revenge! Please continue giving us the wonderful revenge done by Ryu/Yuki!

And I’m already loving it

Is there a way to kill cliffhangers? Maybe I can feed it to my pets…

KICK THEIR A—*cough*—BUTTS MIRA!!! BEAT THEM INTO OBLIVION!!! YAAAAYYY!!!

My points aren’t gathering again! Wonderful form of revenge by the way.

I spent 2,000 points for that ‘all-rounder’ fast pass, but seem to have gotten a specific one. Why is that? Anyways, this is a chapter well done. Great work!

The thief strikes again… Thanks for the chapter!

AWW YEAH!!! Long live Hestia, her future wives, and the crew!

Is there a way for her to recover her lifeforce? There is right? Anyways, I agree that that tail is extremely dangerous. Thanks for the chapter dear author!