yea..a Voldemort acting like a third rate villain of a B movie and a Mc acting cringe every time he talks to somone else many plot holes and unrealistic events nothing special
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I hope you find another story more to your liking! For others reading this review, I'd like to say that I’ve got no problem with the negatives of my story being pointed out. Instead, I welcome it. It motivates me to be a better writer. That being said, I would ask that you read for yourself before discarding this fic. Thanks for your time. - BS6SC