Review Detail of chance_isaac in A Mercenary waking up as Sirius Black(HP SI) (Harry Potter)

Item: A Mercenary waking up as Sirius Black(HP SI) (Harry Potter)
Rating: 1

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chance_isaacLv141yrchance_isaac

Author ruins the story immediately by making hogwarts start at 18. Then he just has sirius do rituals that apparently no one else ever did, just so he could be the male fantasy. “Adonis” appearance super soldier with enhanced “stamina”. Then another to make him only under dumbles and voldy in terms of magical ability. Just lazy writing for a power fantasy harem. The lemons was written well tho.

A Mercenary waking up as Sirius Black(HP SI) (Harry Potter)

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LJ_adamsLv4LJ_adams

be gone

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Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

So your review shouldn't be 1 star, or am I wrong?

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chance_isaacLv14chance_isaac

Meh 2 chapters out of the 20(I think) I read were good to me. Maybe I’m a little harsh to be fair, idk if I can edit it but even so it wouldn’t be above 2 stars.

Gabichu_Yeah:So your review shouldn't be 1 star, or am I wrong?

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GrimReeFerLv1GrimReeFer

Yeah making hogwarts start at 18 the way the author has makes Sirius in his 40's and Bella late 40's or early 50's 😂

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