40 chapters in and it's a little weak. I am just not emphasizing with the wronged child theme of the story. So far her family has been mildly annoying, no worse than most random families you might see in the real world and for this type of novel other heroines would tell her "Cry Me A River!!". The MC has a Mary Sue vibe going, but it's just not done well. How many times can you read that she ran/invented whatever in her second life? Conflict situations also aren't handled well. There's the usual accused of cheating scenario but it just deflates with very little tension. Bottom line there's much better in the genre.
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