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I have read 41 chapters so far and honestly, I am forcing myself to read more. The first 10-12 chapters are info dumps and the dungeon is not original. It is just the Danmachi dungeon without the gods and with other anime shops included. The characters are completely one-dimensional and so is the MC. The worst part about this entire story however is the WRITING. The writing is absolutely horrendous and it is very hard to read and get immersed into. The story is littered with incorrect grammar and spelling mistakes. Author if English is not your first language then you need to put a disclaimer in the synopsis cause the writing was atrocious. Also, soooo many one piece character names were wrong. An example is when he calls Mihawk "eagle eye" instead of "hawk eye". This is just one of many examples. Overall I am disappointed because this could be a decent story if the writing was not so bad.

One Piece : Dungeon

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KinglyNightmares
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Big agree Honestly bruh the ammount of explaining in this story is horrible. I feel like im reading an attempt to explain a different story in which the grammar is that of a 5 year old.