Big agree Honestly bruh the ammount of explaining in this story is horrible. I feel like im reading an attempt to explain a different story in which the grammar is that of a 5 year old.

Honestly you made your character WAAAAY too op instantly. It makes a story just not fun. Like the "reborn with wishes that make your character god instantly" is such a shitty trend. Like i wouldve understood if ge coukd just choose when and where to be reborn but all 3 types of haki, impossible intelligence, and being an unparalleled swordsman is such overkill. Sad to see an intresting idea ruined by op mc disorder