The story is all over the place and doesn’t really flow that well he becomes way to op for no good reason if if there was more development with it too make it flow better I would have given this a better ratinng. Story wise it’s a good idea but your not really executing it well for example at any point in the story there is a conflict you resort to mind raping people (the doctor, kiwi). the characters need more emotion literally just npcs.
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