It's very irritating to read incorrect brand,place etc names. It's quite revolting. Why not just create original names for your novel. Face-slapping is good, only when it doesn't knowingly/unnecessarily hurt anyone deeply and not falsely done. Also MC's character is not that likable (j erk/fake/hypocrit e/retar d/ungratefu l etc.).
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