Review Detail of StiffStick in Face-Slapping System
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Honest review after 90+ chapters! A lot of people have been thrown off in the first chapter because of the MC's attitude, and especially since he got a green hat, like what the synopsis stated. However, I assure that this only happens in the first chapter. After he got the system, his worldview would slowly change, and his way of handling things would change for the better as well. As long as you can get past the first chapter, I assure you that his attitude shown in the first chapter won't show up again. Now, as English is not my main language, it is subpar compared to others. A lot of readers have also been correcting my mistakes, which I appreciate quite a lot. For updates. I usually upload 1 chapter a day but with bonus chapters obtained from weekly goals, and bonus chapters from sponsors, I would sometimes upload more than 3 chapters in a single day. Story development. As this is a kind of slice of life and wish fulfillment story, the story does not progress very quickly where more than a week will pass after a single chapter. Character design is okay. Although it might not be the best, but I assure you that I sure did my best to make them more alive. World background is also being slowly introduced to avoid info dumps as much as possible. That's all. I hope you give this novel a try! Thank you!
Face-Slapping System
StiffStick
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Yes it is a harem, but this is not the same harem that the mc would literally conquer every woman he met. At the current, chapter (96), the mc doesn't even have the thoughts about having a 2nd girlfriend yet, but the 2nd heroine has already appeared, you can see it with the 'subtle' hints I have been giving. Will have to take it slow and let the mc's thoughts change as the story progresses.
Meet_26:is this really harem because no second heroine in 100+ chapter
StiffStick:Yes it is a harem, but this is not the same harem that the mc would literally conquer every woman he met. At the current, chapter (96), the mc doesn't even have the thoughts about having a 2nd girlfriend yet, but the 2nd heroine has already appeared, you can see it with the 'subtle' hints I have been giving. Will have to take it slow and let the mc's thoughts change as the story progresses.
StiffStick:Yes it is a harem, but this is not the same harem that the mc would literally conquer every woman he met. At the current, chapter (96), the mc doesn't even have the thoughts about having a 2nd girlfriend yet, but the 2nd heroine has already appeared, you can see it with the 'subtle' hints I have been giving. Will have to take it slow and let the mc's thoughts change as the story progresses.
a novel like "i don't play by the book" would be great. it got cruelly abandoned even tho it had many fans on this platform. or a good beast taming novel! or just write what you are best at!
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Author the maid who fell in love with him will be his second wife the poor thing is suffering more than me hahahaha
StiffStick:Yes it is a harem, but this is not the same harem that the mc would literally conquer every woman he met. At the current, chapter (96), the mc doesn't even have the thoughts about having a 2nd girlfriend yet, but the 2nd heroine has already appeared, you can see it with the 'subtle' hints I have been giving. Will have to take it slow and let the mc's thoughts change as the story progresses.
Honestly I like the development of the story and how the characters are written. The only thing I don't quite agree with is the Harem because I actually liked the relationship of the MC and Stacey and the fact that she's been helping the MC but I guess I'll just have to live with it. But all in all I'd give this a 8/10. keep up the good work [img=recommend]
