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Review Detail of Vince_Sacay in Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage

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Vince_Sacay
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This novel has a very simple plot, Raphael was born by his lesbian mother and mom just for her mom to fcuk him when he grows up lol, and not just that, he also has the 'it is alright for my women to build their Yuri harem as long as my dick is the only thing they will suck' and yes, there is a yuir harem, though I love it the plot seems to stick solely unto those two and nothing more. Worlding building has nothing on it, character development was only received by his sister that he fucked right after, and have a Yuri 4some with her 3 mother's lol, it was hot ngl. And how about the characters then? They are all bland except when they are about to sex but ngl, the sex with Mc sometimes felt like it was done by a 15 year old kid, hope the author will notice that and change it, it is kind of irritating and annoying. It should be only 1 ngl, but as this novel sometimes gets me hard, I'll be giving it 2 As for the writing quality, there are times when the author made a mistake on his/her grammar,not just very often though sometimes consistent, but it wasn't that bad anyway.

Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage

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Vince_Sacay
Vince_SacayLv1Vince_Sacay

I hate this dmn auto correct. Everything that I have written sounds like a bad grammar sigh, also to add, Raphael mom and mother gave birth to their daughter and son just for a simple purpose 'I am bored with your finger, so give me somebody else to fck me' yup, that is right folks, grooming everyone, grooming

Vince_Sacay
Vince_SacayLv1Vince_Sacay

Forgot to add, was that ntr really necessary author? I know Raphael somewhat has some grudges on his sister but that was stupid and really unneeded action, ntring her for what? Just to let her join his harem? Man