Review Detail of Winston_Schrumm in Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage

I like the story so far but I belave their needs to be more stakes involved in the story like stronger enemies from the south and thier need to be threat like if x happens in the south enemies that are capable of harming MC become involved in the MC's life. otherwise I also beleave a battle taking more than 10 chapter is a bit overkill unless it involves different groups over a larger time scale otherwise it becomes a bit repetitive. it's a good story and I hope it become more flushed out and the MC gets into more smutty situations.