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Plot holes. Confusing backstory with things unexplained. Writing feels like it lacks planning. Mc makes poor choice in particular in how he spends his points and overall interacts with the system. Terrible name choices. And strange behavior from other characters that doesn't make much sense.
Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel
Dere_Isaac
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you know for a second there, I was about to doubt this book, but the moment you mentioned terrible name choice... I realized you do not exist. A world of over 30 million Names, and I picked easy ones to remember that are not bounded by culture and you say there are terrible name choices... should I have named my characters after your family members?
MC's biggest enemies so far have been a trusted and respected "Elder Fatso" and a scary assassin who goes by "Iron Stab". Makes me feel like I'm reading a parody novel. I stopped reading at chapter 110 though so I'll never find out if they survive the "Rabid big foot rabbits"
Dere_Isaac:you know for a second there, I was about to doubt this book, but the moment you mentioned terrible name choice... I realized you do not exist. A world of over 30 million Names, and I picked easy ones to remember that are not bounded by culture and you say there are terrible name choices... should I have named my characters after your family members?
I’d say that your naming choice is one of the many great things about your novel! It makes the story more memorable. Personally I appreciated the names you choose!
Dere_Isaac:you know for a second there, I was about to doubt this book, but the moment you mentioned terrible name choice... I realized you do not exist. A world of over 30 million Names, and I picked easy ones to remember that are not bounded by culture and you say there are terrible name choices... should I have named my characters after your family members?
Dere_Isaac:I see.... u have not reached those places... u too far behind man... exercise a bit more patience