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Archeleaus

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I hate authors that write stupid ideas in a good novel

2021-03-04 JoinedAscension Island
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus3mth
    Posted

    Cringe, other then that, pretty good grammar. Also, the author should learn to show, not tell.

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    Starting a Cult in Another World
    Fantasy · Kirito_K5
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus7mth
    Replied to Sensei_Tai
    It felt like his body was rejecting the act of using a sword.
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    Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality
    Fantasy · Animosity
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus8mth
    Replied to PEARL_WANG

    Stop sucking dick

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    Chalice Of Blood
    Urban · THE_WORDSMITH
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus8mth
    Replied to kingsleyanosike054

    http://wbnv.in/a/c8hrMFs Overhauled. Centre’s around a guy that try to make better use of overhaul’s quirk. Pretty good, the author’s on break tho.

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    Ant King In MHA
    Anime & Comics · VeganMaster
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus9mth
    Replied to Dere_Isaac

    What’s you discord?

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    Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel
    Fantasy · Dere_Isaac
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus10mth
    Replied to TheLegitTroll

    I don’t know about you, but I’m made of atoms not ‘energy’

    'Whatever,' he was happy that he would soon, well, relatively soon acquire the ability to become a human. 'Hmm… I wonder if I will have to possess another human to acquire the body, or the system will give me a new one.'
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    Reincarnated as an Energy with a System
    Eastern · Snoring_Panda
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus10mth
    Replied to Dragon_Tamer_4184

    Lupin, on Netflix

    I scoff at that "Since when do real thief's exist in this era? The last real thief was Lupin from the 21 century a full 200 years ago before the age of the Quirks, anything after that is just pathetic"
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    MHA: Code
    Anime & Comics · Alcoholic_Panda
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus10mth
    Commented

    What about frost?

    "Mud, for example, uses earth and water elements. Lightning would be another example, combining fire and wind. There is also magma, mist, and sand, using fire with earth, water with air and fire, and sand, combining earth and wind respectively." The mage lectured.
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    New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
    Games · Galanar
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus10mth
    Commented
    Alexander looked at the elf with incredulous eyes. He then swiped back to Ash Elf and looked at the elf man with a sadistic smile before pressing confirm on his starting race.
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    New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
    Games · Galanar
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus10mth
    Commented

    Shiva would matched more but ok

    "Asura."
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    Overhauled
    Anime & Comics · EpicBean
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus10mth
    Commented

    Gold

    Ch 16 Living
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    Overhauled
    Anime & Comics · EpicBean
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus10mth
    Commented

    I’m just imagining ultron’s voice lol

    "You have impressed me Aizawa, I didn't expect to have to blow my arms up…" His voice came out deeper, the filter in his throat making his voice drop a few octaves with a mechanical hum. His voice amused.
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    Overhauled
    Anime & Comics · EpicBean
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus11mth
    Posted

    Stop going form past tense to present tense in the same fucking sentence, please it hurts my brain. When writing a novel you should stick to past tense, only change tenses when a character is talking “outloud”.

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    Entering God's tower
    Fantasy · Junni_MC
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus1yr
    Commented

    Use the bones as stingers and inject them into you victims. Obviously their bones are strong enough to contain the toxin so use it to expel it.

    Ch 463 Chapter – 457 The cause of the Curse
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    Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan
    Anime & Comics · Alex_Clive
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus1yr
    Replied to dIABLo_22

    I guess.

    The quests in Morpheus Online had five difficulty levels. They were Normal, Intermediate, Hard, Extreme, and Heroic. For a level one player like Arthur, Hard difficulty was basically impossible.
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    VRMMORPG: Dragomancer Reborn
    Games · Grand_Void_Daoist
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus1yr
    Replied to dIABLo_22

    Yea but that mean you could have a easy S rank quest

    The quests in Morpheus Online had five difficulty levels. They were Normal, Intermediate, Hard, Extreme, and Heroic. For a level one player like Arthur, Hard difficulty was basically impossible.
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    VRMMORPG: Dragomancer Reborn
    Games · Grand_Void_Daoist
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus1yr
    Commented

    I like the novel but this is…

    Ch 70 Rabbit Hunting
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    MHA: Code
    Anime & Comics · Alcoholic_Panda
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus1yr
    Replied to southgamez

    Same

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    That time I got reincarnated as an abyssal Phoenix
    Anime & Comics · Dark_light
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus1yr
    Replied to UndeadBeing

    A lot of these “problems” could be solved if you paid a little more attention to details. Either way I do agree about the bigger problems you talked about.

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    Ant King In MHA
    Anime & Comics · VeganMaster
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  • Archeleaus
    Archeleaus1yr
    Replied to ThanatosGreekGod

    Because dragons grow strong over time and author based this on a day format

    Ch 28 Boss Battle! Against The Giant Ice Bear!
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    Epic of Ice Dragon: Reborn As An Ice Dragon With A System
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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