Review Detail of Empyrium in Re: In My Bloody Hit Novel

Updates seem to be good, but there are many silly mistakes, which shouldnt be there, like sometimes he writes something small, the next time he writes it big Mc is okay, and I like him, by why does he want to kill his little sis just for a bit of power, god, you are the author of the novel, are you that useless? Big world, rest seems fine