Review Detail of GodOfGreedAs in AS DARKSEID IN MARVEL (OMNIVERSE)

nah brother i still remember when you uploaded the zeus fic. be it the grammar or writing there were so many mistakes but now i can see massive improvements. great work man

Does he have reality warping abilities? Otherwise Franklin Richards is probably the strongest mutant character

He is not even born yet and will never going to be born

So, no reality warpers in this fanfic? 🤔

Yes there is

Fair enough. I recommend using grammarly since its free, and in my opinion you need it. You can watch a tutorial on how to use grammarly since you’re using it to write a story, not an academic report. So its best to keep it simple. Good luck 👍

quick question for this novel before I read this...there no yuri right?

Yes

perfect ill add like the other 2

does thec look like darksied

Nah bruh, from the grammar of this review I wouldnt think so……

No problem bro if looking for grammar its, not for you

Author have you tried using anything to improve the grammar? Even asking someone to help you correct stuff would work...

Auther Could I ask a question Please Or make it a request Darkseid is so ugly I just hope that Mc use ability on himself to turn himself in to acceptable apearnce I can't believe a woman will fell for that face ever How about Making him look like John wick?? I am waiting for your reply..

I mean he changed his looks at near cheaper 30 if I am not wrong

OK I will resume reading

I am fun of John wick I hope you think about turning Mc into joh wick please

Bro grammer is not the most important thing, but when I was reading this I thought I had a stroke. Get Grammarly or some other free app it will help a lot

I am using it

what is your native language