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The story is alright but not great. Grammar is slightly questionable at times, but mostly good. The real problem is the main character is given WAY too much. He knows the future, already has his full power from the future, can control time, and his enemies are weaker since he traveled to the past. What exactly is the challenge here?
Should I Become a Villain?
AFM31_ALDA
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Yeah, MC is really strong. That's why this story has the hashtag #overpowered. However, the other characters are equally strong. Otherwise, MC would have beaten them all from the start. The future may change because the MC doesn't behave as he did in the past. Thanks for the review. I'm thinking about revising the first chapters to include any future conflicts the MC will face
Yeah, that's probably a good idea. Making it clear early on he still has many threats despite his overwhelming power would indeed help others become more interested in the troubles he'd face. Problem is, it's hard to realistically make something equal to time powers. The guy with precognition powers was mentioned, but he couldn't predict spool back. So even when he had the complete drop on the MC, it didn't matter. Speaking of spool back, I'm not sure it was mentioned, but is there a reason he can't just keep using it until he's the only person with powers? The story says it only costs magic for him to use.
AFM31_ALDA:Yeah, MC is really strong. That's why this story has the hashtag #overpowered. However, the other characters are equally strong. Otherwise, MC would have beaten them all from the start. The future may change because the MC doesn't behave as he did in the past. Thanks for the review. I'm thinking about revising the first chapters to include any future conflicts the MC will faceimage
um.... that just defeats the purpose of coming from the future with your strength. Do you know what op means? Like really by doing that it means your skills in writing needs more training. If their are other people who can challenge your op mc then it's not a op mc. Not only that why the heck could anyone challenge someone who came from the future.
AFM31_ALDA:Yeah, MC is really strong. That's why this story has the hashtag #overpowered. However, the other characters are equally strong. Otherwise, MC would have beaten them all from the start. The future may change because the MC doesn't behave as he did in the past. Thanks for the review. I'm thinking about revising the first chapters to include any future conflicts the MC will faceimage