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Review Detail of Kamera189 in Ascensium: For Faith And Glory

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This story is pretty decent but for me at least it’s hard to read, I’m probably being nitpicky here but half the time I don’t know if someone is talking or if it’s just narration and also sometimes it’s hard to know who’s talking. Minus grammar related issues though I think the concept is cool and the characters are decent.

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Ascensium: For Faith And Glory

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Thanks for the honest review. I'll take your words under consideration.

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Hey! I'm adding a fan character in upcoming chapters who helps battle an upcoming enemy. If you want a chance at being selected. All you have to do is leave a thorough review, and the best review wins