About 80 chapters in. The erotic writing part is terrible and bleeds out into other chapters, don’t mind erotic scenes when I read but it was just bad. Story pacing is rather slow, and everyone is an idiot but the MC, who is very much a Mary Sue. The grammer is better then most stories on here though, and the world background seems well thought out.
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