Review Detail of Evelena21 in Herald of Steel

First of all, everything for me is good (except for a couple of things). In fact this novel is quite amazing in itself. I like it a lot. The war strategies, the politics, and etc. are all really good. I believe feedback is important. I have tried writing on another account, and I know how precious information from the readers can help. So, I'll take this chance to give my impressions on each of the mc's partners/potential partners. Hopefully, the author could read this and take it into account when writing the romance aspect of the novel. (Note: This is based on first 201 chapter only, any chapters further were not considered as I have yet to read them) Cambyses (Daughter of the Mercenary group leader) - My first impression of her is very nice. Her conversations, dynamic, and chemistry with the MC is really good. She has one of the deepest connection or love towards the mc. Her and the MC's relationship is very genuine which I absolutely love. Furthermore, I also like the fact that she has a role and not simply a trophy lover, I do look forward to more this. Mean (Slave of Cambyses) - Her banters and mc teasing her is fun to read. The relationship between the MC, Her, and Cambyses is a very good one. Its refreshing to see such cordial relationship for once. The chemistry between these three is something I just could not get enough of. Ophenia (The runaway Priestess and daughter of the enemy General) - She has a cute personality despite her tragic past. If you read the her past, you might dislike her (or not) but the author did good job with making her likeable enough to disregard that shameful past (enough to make me really like her along with Cam and Mean) Gelene (Previous toy slave of the mercenary) - Not a fan of her. She's manipulative snake. The way she tried to provoke Cambyses (one of my fav) pretty much ruined my impression of her. She thinks like a backstabber, and their is a high chance that she will sabotage the other females and backstab the mc. I don't really like this. I believe that you shouldn't take a backstabber or someone who would harm your loved ones as part of the harem. Plus she's the type to use s** favors with any men to get what she wants. Azira & Azura - They hate the mc (understandable). But the way they try to show that hate is really cute that I just cant take the threat seriously. They have potential, and I already like them quite a bit. I wanna see how the author plans to turn this hate into love (if he did plan to in the first place, but I hope he did). Mikaya, Seelima, Farzah - I hate these womens. If you have read those chapters, you would def understand what I mean. These women likes to have fun with multiple guys and doing the deed with them at the same time. I dont like it at all. Reading those chap was a pain. Among all the women, these three I hope will have nothing to do with the mc's harem. Their personality and their concept of 'fun' along with those painful chaps made my impression of them absolute rock bottom. I just hope the author doesn't plan on adding these womens. Hellma - She is related to those three above, but I don't know if she is also into the same thing as those three. So for now my impression of her is on positive neutral. She seem to have that icy princess type of persona with how she treats the mc (understandable given what the mc did). As long as she isn't into those things like the three above, then I can see myself liking her a lot in the future (depending on the how the author treats her character). Tbh, I hope the author treats her character well, I can see some potential in her character. As a side note. I noticed that recently, the author has been focusing the r18 on those three cursed women more instead of the mc's true lovers. I dont really like reading r18 on those three women (Mikaya, Seelima, Farzah). If it were with Cambyses, Mean, or Ophenia, then it would be a different matter. The mc has a good relationship with these womens so any r18 with them is a fun and exciting read. While any r18 on those cursed women is a painful read (to the point that I just gloss over them). and that's all for me! Thanks for taking the time to read!