Review Detail of empressblackrose09 in Destined (Unmei)

First of all, I love your book cover! This will help you drawn new readers because of how cool it looks however, I suggest that you may add some at least a little filler on it that would make it like a 'wow' factor if new readers would see it. ^_^ Second, your synopsis. It can be considered part of a prologue or chapter 01 because it's too long. I suggest that you may summarize it or make it short. Put a little vague detail on it but not too much so that your readers would be curious on how the story of the plot goes on. Third and last. The plot. I get it that this might be the usual amnesiac MC that got thrown to another world (harsh word for to be thrown xD xD xD) but even if that is the case, I like how you put an effort to the plot and the interaction of Milo and Lok that seems like a natural to me. Keep writing! ^_^