Honestly its subpar writing....story had potential but it just wasnt developed well. The MC and his interactions seem forced...they dont feel natural. MC is too naive, too beta, too awkward and just not confident. I mean he has the most beautiful wife but he cant hold a conversation with other women easily. He keeps asking can I hug you, can i kiss you? and it feels too stupid when she has already shown him that its okay....I mean wife keeps helping him grow but he lacks ambition. You cant feel drive from him to grow etc. She tells him to read and gain knowledge but it didnt show him doing that...honestly story is not written well. Around chapter 75 I just couldnt anymore
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