Amazing novel and premise so far. I love Lia and Nyla, updates a ton so that's good and the story has tons of potential, only complaint is that Helia feels so forced and tbh everything about her is annoying but sadly she is gonna be in the harem.
thewhitesnow
Liked it!
LIKEi mean i don't want him to drop the story, I just feel it would be much better without Hella or just don't make her part of the harem problem solved.
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I'm saying they should never end up together, that's the point because everyone can see it coming and I just don't like her character compared to all the other girls which I love btw they are all done great she just doesn't seem to fit.
thewhitesnow:How is Helia's only feels forced. they aren't even together and still fight. how should it be done?
It won't be forceful. Just wait what will happen in the story. Helia won't accept Rio as her husband unless something big happened. There are many mysteries that aren't revealed. Assuming that it will be forceful because they have some interaction isn't that good. If it was that way then Nyla would've been in harem by now.
SayHelloToGrape999:I'm saying they should never end up together, that's the point because everyone can see it coming and I just don't like her character compared to all the other girls which I love btw they are all done great she just doesn't seem to fit.
You will like her it's just that she needs to be an unlikable character until her character development happen.
SayHelloToGrape999:I'm saying they should never end up together, that's the point because everyone can see it coming and I just don't like her character compared to all the other girls which I love btw they are all done great she just doesn't seem to fit.