Review Detail of Melitia_Snek in Mmlllmmmllm
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I can't give a proper review since only 3 chapters have been published by the time I'm writing this so I will probably write one later when this novel gets more chapters. From the 3 chapters so far I can tell the grammar is quite nice and with little to no spelling mistakes, I cannot comment on the characters just yet but I look forward to it too. The only thing I have a problem with is that Koenji in the LN and anime got to school on the bus and it was an important scene for Kushida's character so I hope you could explain why it's different in this novel.
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Abandoneddddd:Thank you for this opinion dear reader. As for your question, answering it might be spoilerish. I hope you can tolerate it to the end. I would also like to thank you for the errors you have pointed out. Keep supporting this story and thank you again.
Abandoneddddd:Thank you for this opinion dear reader. As for your question, answering it might be spoilerish. I hope you can tolerate it to the end. I would also like to thank you for the errors you have pointed out. Keep supporting this story and thank you again.
The thing is, and it’s a problem with most authors without a complete (and I mean really complete) plan from the beginning face. There are just details here and there which would not make sense say if we had the knowledge of Y2V6 for example instead o just Y1V1. I think the author of this fanfic taking liberties to straighten up some of these small details and help them make his own fanfic better are praiseworthy :)
AliviaAZ:Is that the reason why there are some subtle changes, to make it "more realistic"?