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Abandoneddddd
AbandonedddddAuthor1yrAbandoneddddd

Hi there, I've decided to start writing. It's my first time so I'm looking forward to constructive criticism. Thanks in advance for reading, and I hope this Fanfiction will find a good place in your heart. ✍️

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LunaKindred
LunaKindredLv3LunaKindred

Is it romance?

M7TH1C
M7TH1CLv13M7TH1C

Will there be romance? Doesn't have to be a main focus but I just wanna know If there's a love interest,

Krypton71
Krypton71Lv12Krypton71

Spoilers!!! ^ Kouenji: As a 40 year old male, he views the others as kids. Loveable kids though. (He was a playboy in first life) Also Kouenji: His heart is too big for one lover. Mixed signals here. I do like me a bit of harem romance but im confused about this. However, do dig in because the writing quality and story is great itself!

Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv5Lordmoonlight

what's with all the different pov rn

Abandoneddddd
AbandonedddddAuthorAbandoneddddd

I thing it'll be capital for the next of the story. If you want to see the original pov, please wait for the thirteenth chapter of the second tome.

Lordmoonlight:what's with all the different pov rn