Review Detail of marcelll3214 in Infinite Stratos: The Fugitive Second Male Pilot
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CHapter eleven and nothing happened yet. WOuld not call this infinite stratos fic.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Infinite Stratos: The Fugitive Second Male Pilot
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Blake_SilverLv4Blake_Silver
My guy so blind he calls a fight and chase sequence “nothing”. Besides sometimes stories take a bit of time to start up. I’m assuming you’ve never read a story before so you probably don’t know but there is something at the beginning of the story called exposition, where the world and characters are set up.
marcelll3214Lv2marcelll3214
Which character and what world was set up in those eleven chapters? Chase sequence? For 11 chapters? Where nothing besides mc geting away happened? Only is attacking was somewhat ok. But that is too little of a story to be interesting.
Blake_Silver:My guy so blind he calls a fight and chase sequence “nothing”. Besides sometimes stories take a bit of time to start up. I’m assuming you’ve never read a story before so you probably don’t know but there is something at the beginning of the story called exposition, where the world and characters are set up.
DaoistosrKh6Lv4DaoistosrKh6
Blake_Silver:My guy so blind he calls a fight and chase sequence “nothing”. Besides sometimes stories take a bit of time to start up. I’m assuming you’ve never read a story before so you probably don’t know but there is something at the beginning of the story called exposition, where the world and characters are set up.