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Chaddts
ChaddtsLv111mthChaddts

It's as bad as it looks. Nothing has been edited or proofread at all. Trunks has been genderbent, but still retains the male name. A bunch of stuff is simply glossed over and skipped. Minimal, to nonexistent conversations. It reads like a 10 year old wrote this.

transmigrated as son goten

amarril14

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amarril14
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thank you for your honest review i try to learn and grow as an author

Chaddts
ChaddtsLv1Chaddts

You need to put in the effort. Get grammarly. It's free. Download it, use it

amarril14:thank you for your honest review i try to learn and grow as an author