Review Detail of Sasuke_Waifu in Surviving in my Own Unpublished Failed Novel

The story is ok to me. I've read until chapter 120 and I might continue reading or maybe not, depends. The story isn't too fast pace which is good. The information dump is inevitable when they have system setting which really not a big deal. The reason why I didn't give 5 star is because the MC Russell Moon, isn't the kind of MC I liked. I don't really want him to be crueler or cold type of man but his character somehow make me felt he didn't suit with the title of Mediator of Chaos. He's weird as described as other characters and I agree with that. The other thing that turn me off from continue reading this novel is the lack of fighting and action from our MC until 70+ chapters when we finally see him fighting. In the earlier chapters, MC just got a bunch of things and titles and cheat keys after he 'somehow' luckily being contracted by a powerful constellation that none other constellation knew about. Then he got another pack of booster + cheat keys (skills ie). It seems like author just want to conveniently make him became OP as fast as he could for no reason. His life wasn't really in danger in the earlier chapters per say. Fortunately there is no harem tag but throughout the novel, the smell of harem vibe is too much to ignored. I could even see his sister became one of his harem member on how much she tried to meddle and want to involve in everything her oppa did. Request for author to give at least one male friend to our MC Russell Moon. It's weird none of the male students ever seem to be talking to him and he kept on being with girls all the time. I have a sister and as a female it's still weird for me to not have friend and instead befriending my sister's friend. Sorry for the long review but overall I think author-sama already did a great job. Kept on writing until the end.