Review Detail of Qenam in In Harry Potter as the Dark One

First of all lets start with why did i start reading this fanfic, it’s really simple it’s yuri tag. Then lets say why did i didn’t notice it before? Because there isn’t harrypotter tag. I started with this because authors sometimes underestimate the power of tags. REVIEW: MAIN CHARACTER: Backstory of main character is meh because you explained it vaguely but this can be a plus too because sometimes character background makes a story change it’s impression in the readers mind and turn an awesome story into cringe or too depressing to read. SPOILER: For example mention of sexual assault to the main character by one of her foster father in her previous life. Because it’s vague i can read while maintaining the impression it’s probably only touching her a few times while she ISN’T naked or anything and it makes me more comfortable to read, if you did mention r@pe it would make it more depressing and if you did go into detail it can even make story vibe unbearable in some cases. If you want to make her face her past later please make it after story completely taken shape (please don’t forget to control the amount of details to not make it too much or too less) and i would prefer it to be after she has a romantic partner to comfort her and make story less depressing. SPOILER END REINCARNATION: While cliche it’s cliche for a reason. You made the process good enough i can spot any big problems. Powers: Lower limit and upper limit of granted power is good enough to make story progress without directly making her OP, and versitality is good too. Magic System: It looks good for now. The only problem i can think of is how much time does MC need to be powerful enough to be at least not helpless but i guess her power is at least good enough at running away. Story: I can find problems but they aren’t exactly problems, they are caused by MC’s personality and i think that is better because rather then making characters personality fit the story, making the story according to the characters personality and ability is a more enjoyable story, but it tests authors ability to write more so i hope you can make it. There isn’t any notable character or event interaction yet so i can’t say anything more. But current story is good and i think you won’t make any big errors if you really are writing this story while enjoying it. Advice?: I will say don’t listen to readers but i think that can sometimes make you see errors in advance so i will say listen to ideas but don’t implement it if you can’t enjoy or like the idea yourself because then story won’t be any good. Do i like the story? YES. But making story perfect for 20-30 chapter then making it shit for 40-1000 chapters isn’t something rare so i hope you will keep providing us with an enjoyable story. Thank you for reading my review.