Review Detail of Jashm in The Heroine Eavesdropped on My Voice Heart
Review detail
Concept is unique and well applied but hypocrite MC pretending to be a virgin and multiple reincarnated individuals (regressor) ruins everything. The thing about 10 reincarnations is also unnecessary, just make the MC looks more incompetent without adding anything to the plot.
The Heroine Eavesdropped on My Voice Heart
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In the previous 9 rounds the MC tried to follow the plot of his own novel. What he practiced there was his acting experience and the understanding that the heroines would always side with the protagonist even if they had a good relationship with the MC at the beginning. So the MC in round 10 subconsciously developed a wary mentality towards the heroine when romantically involved with them. So right now he still maintains the friend status, at least until he knows for sure the heroines won't fall for the protagonist in the end because the protagonist's aura is a cheating thing.
DogLickerGods:At least I want character development for the MC in mentality. I don't want to instantly create a mentally perfect MC with just a few chapters.
Endo_2014:No if the MC didnt even get a character development in 10 lives then he's just outright useless
Endo_2014:No if the MC didnt even get a character development in 10 lives then he's just outright useless
Stories usually don’t last for 70 years. It was likely 5 years maximum and he obviously restarted before the time was up, so i doubt his true age is past 50. Also what type of story has all it’s character development before the stories even started. Dude the characters didn’t exist before chapter one.
BlackDragneel:Imagine you had 10 lives even if you live for around 70 years it is still 700 years. Still no character development suggests retardation.
Me parece muy bien, despues de todo solo fue una persona normal obligada a ser el villano de tercera y aun cuando trato de serlo no lograba nada, sin mencionar que con las traiciones en general que sufrio por seguir la trama lo debió haber dejado en un eatado similar al de subaru y su miedo por asi llamarlo, a que todo lo que tiene se arruine por la armadura de la trama que tanto lo hiso sufrir debió generar un gran miedo sino un trauma el cual con el tiempo se recuperara con la evolución de personaje 👍👌
DogLickerGods:At least I want character development for the MC in mentality. I don't want to instantly create a mentally perfect MC with just a few chapters.
You said it yourself, a story usually lasts for max 5 years and in that 5 years all characters of that story goes through character development, so if this MC lived 10 lives i.e max 50-years min 10-years(assuming a story lasts 1 year) and still has not gone through character development, then you can think what kind of MC he is...
YOLO36:Stories usually don’t last for 70 years. It was likely 5 years maximum and he obviously restarted before the time was up, so i doubt his true age is past 50. Also what type of story has all it’s character development before the stories even started. Dude the characters didn’t exist before chapter one.
EaCalibur:You said it yourself, a story usually lasts for max 5 years and in that 5 years all characters of that story goes through character development, so if this MC lived 10 lives i.e max 50-years min 10-years(assuming a story lasts 1 year) and still has not gone through character development, then you can think what kind of MC he is...
Uncle_Sheogorath:Why are you invoking the french flag here for?
Endo_2014:No if the MC didnt even get a character development in 10 lives then he's just outright useless
EaCalibur:You said it yourself, a story usually lasts for max 5 years and in that 5 years all characters of that story goes through character development, so if this MC lived 10 lives i.e max 50-years min 10-years(assuming a story lasts 1 year) and still has not gone through character development, then you can think what kind of MC he is...
EaCalibur:You said it yourself, a story usually lasts for max 5 years and in that 5 years all characters of that story goes through character development, so if this MC lived 10 lives i.e max 50-years min 10-years(assuming a story lasts 1 year) and still has not gone through character development, then you can think what kind of MC he is...
My question what did he do in all the other 9 lives, I'm assuming the MC lived a FULL life before the plot concluded. It's been stated in the story and by the MC himself that in one of his lives he fulfilled the plot then died so are the other 8 lives are just him trying to change the plot cause it should only take maybe 3, five tops but 9 seems excessive to not be fully developed. I just want to make sense of it to be honest
DogLickerGods:Whatever