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secretiveplotter1
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Just caught up with the latest chapter and there's many things I want to say. Firstly, the writing in the early chapters is good, at least for me, but as the story goes on it seems like it was regressing/getting bad instead of improving. There are many repetitive paragraphs, bad translation/mess up grammar, and inconsistent names and races of the characters like Bai Yun>Bai Yi, Bai He>White River, then there's Yuan Cong that was introduced as a member of Shepherd God Race and came off as member of Original Spirit Race in the following chapters. I know the 'He' is respectful way to address the Gods but it really ticks me off, srsly, because there's many apostrophe when there are many God in the chapter, and it was also used even though the character is female so it was so hard to know whether the God that was mentioned is Female(like Flower Sword Immortal she was getting mentioned as 'He' then was later have a love interest with Tri-Talent Sword Immortal, so I was confused because I thought FLI was a Male), the use of 'He's instead of His/Her, there's also the use of Your Excellency(followed by Gods Name) in conversation when it should be His/Her bcoz they were just mentioned and not actually talking to the said Gods. Loots/Skills/Talents that came out of nowhere and was not mentioned in the previous chapters, maybe because of some duplicated promps, so I had to go back to the previous chapters to check where the hell it came from. I like the story even though it gives me a lot of headache while reading it because of the reasons mentioned above. I hope the Author try to edit the chapters and improve his writing.(Its's my first time writing a review, and the things I wrote above are just a part of my experiences reading this novel😅😉 Hope this help to improve the story💜)

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LoL the spacing I did was suddenly gone so this came as a long paragraph😂😂 Sorry guys✌️