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if he decided to flip a coin to know which direction he should go in case he didn't know, his providence will definitely take effect to assist him. Or by just blindly following his intuition or luck, he should able to go anywhere he wants.
And wherever lamb went, wolf was sure to follow.
The third Jake I'm reading this month lol😆
yeah evelynn...
Could be Snow's lover that, unfortunately, he didn't meet bcoz he was just beginning to travel different worlds rn.
*She was the granddaughter of the Radiant Protector, the old man that Lin Yuan gave the Lifespan Mouse after Moon Empress, the one that summoned the Gigantic Tree(Sacred Source Item) that enveloped the whole Radiant Continent from the attack of one of Gods of Freedom Federation.
Michael also have the Forest Elves Summoning Core so there's a lot of forest Elves in his territory and it was mention in earlier chapters that Forest Elves valued their ancestors.
Just caught up with the latest chapter and there's many things I want to say. Firstly, the writing in the early chapters is good, at least for me, but as the story goes on it seems like it was regressing/getting bad instead of improving. There are many repetitive paragraphs, bad translation/mess up grammar, and inconsistent names and races of the characters like Bai Yun>Bai Yi, Bai He>White River, then there's Yuan Cong that was introduced as a member of Shepherd God Race and came off as member of Original Spirit Race in the following chapters. I know the 'He' is respectful way to address the Gods but it really ticks me off, srsly, because there's many apostrophe when there are many God in the chapter, and it was also used even though the character is female so it was so hard to know whether the God that was mentioned is Female(like Flower Sword Immortal she was getting mentioned as 'He' then was later have a love interest with Tri-Talent Sword Immortal, so I was confused because I thought FLI was a Male), the use of 'He's instead of His/Her, there's also the use of Your Excellency(followed by Gods Name) in conversation when it should be His/Her bcoz they were just mentioned and not actually talking to the said Gods. Loots/Skills/Talents that came out of nowhere and was not mentioned in the previous chapters, maybe because of some duplicated promps, so I had to go back to the previous chapters to check where the hell it came from. I like the story even though it gives me a lot of headache while reading it because of the reasons mentioned above. I hope the Author try to edit the chapters and improve his writing.(Its's my first time writing a review, and the things I wrote above are just a part of my experiences reading this novel😅😉 Hope this help to improve the story💜)
Mr/s. Author, I just wanted to ask if the human race gods in the story are only from Chinese Mythology cause I see Wukong, Buddha etc here. Will you include other Gods in different mythologies like Olympus and Asgard? I just really like reading novels where different mythologies are put together in a nut shell😅