Review Detail of EvilBlueCrystal in MHA: Karna
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The protagonist has a creepy ordinary boring personality, He has a quirk that he never wanted and can't be bothered to train it, He says the world is dangerous but has no interest in becoming strong, a hero or villain. He has no goals or personality or his own so he decides to join UA simply because his sister tells him to, he cooks food and goes to school to argue with the class president then a quirk test where the protagonist describes what happened, but feels like he's not even part of the story, and not knowing who he is. Then his quirk is revealed that he is hiding which let's him absorb energy that makes his body stronger without any more details. Then he shows his peak harem skills where be goes to the invisible girl and tells her "I SEE YOU 0_0" and gifts her a cloak so he can't see her anymore. Then there's a hero test where he exposes his quirk by absorbing their attacks, he invites the invisible girl and Momo to his house and exposes his quirk more by explaining it to them. Then he gives information to the heroes about Shigaraki and Eri, and then there's the raid. The writing is below average, Locations are hastily introduced and abruptly changed without any purpose, there is isn't any development, the chapters are short that consists mostly him describing the events, but lacking important or interesting details.
MHA: Karna
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um. . not having a goal doesn't indicate that he doesn't have a personality. I understand that the MC is not your cup of tea. As for short chapters, well I'm only writing maximum 1500 words and minimum 700 words, it is short I won't deny that. He didn't explain as a whole, he just told them that he can't make her visible. And I don't know about you, but if I see a naked girl I will look at first sure, but after that I will tell her just like the MC did. MC didn't give any info on Shigaraki to anyone so check your facts. MC did give info about Eri that is a fact, and I'm not a person that would want a child to suffer in order to keep my meta knowledge on point, I mean, there are bound for some changes right?
I don't know dude, you say that the mc is creepy and then implied that he shouldn't told Toru about be able to see her naked, be able to see someone naked and don't tell then is very creepy. About borring personality, well I don't super disagree, it's kinda like Saitama from One Punch Man, he is way to strong to care for the challenges in the beginning of the story. We don't know yet about if he train or not his quirk. I agree that during the quirk test it does feel like he is barely part of the story (but I think the author just wanted to get over that part of the story, we all read 1000 times that test in 1000 other fics). About Eri, he is just a good person, and leave a 5 year to be torture when you can do something is the minimum to be excepted from a good person. And lastly, I don't think he was truly wanted to hide his quirk, just teasing his classmates, what I believe he is hiding is his true strength.
I'm mostly here in the reviews about the "Locations are hastily introduced and abruptly changed without any purpose" part. I definitely picked up on that. Though I didn't find any interest or enjoyment in his quirk being hidden for a bit. Not sure it helped do anything besides (like you said) being a conversation he could have.