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The author writes with a good mix of detailed description and off the cuffs humor. This story isn't within the normal bounds of what I would read, but I've enjoyed it thus far. My biggest advice to the author is that maybe the amount of system information so far is a little overwhelming. Granted, I'm not someone who extensively reads system web novels so I wouldn't be offended if my advice was disregarded. I just think that the "whimsical fun" of your writing is what I enjoy the most, and that's what can you turn your story into a divine class monster haha :).

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The goddess who called me into this world, take responsibility!

Kefir4ek

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Thanks for such a detailed answer! As for the system, over time it will get a little less. At the moment, she acts as a conductor between the main character and the world around him. However, I would like to note that although the system will be given less screen time, it will not disappear completely. I hope you understand."