Interesting story. There are a few grammar and spelling errors at the start, but its still pretty easy to read so that's not really a problem. The original betrayal is quite... dramatic. Like the guy was clearly using some voodoo curses to get to that situation lol. The story seems fun enough and the new disciple character seems pretty fun. It's a decent read. Do check it out.
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