Review Detail of Hentai_Senchou in One Piece : Kingdom Building System
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Story should be called "Handout simulator, watch slaves build a kingdom for you." Mc has been in the world for 1 month, no on knows his kingdom exists except fishman island, water seven, whitebeard pirates, cp-9 and the world government. Yet the kingdom has 6 people as strong as whitebeard, 7 people 1 level stronger than that, and 2 people 1 level stronger than the previous level. Mc has done nothing but sit around telling people to do stuff, and people as strong as and much stronger than whitebeard slave away for him because he got them from the system. Blows my mind that an author would give this much of a handout without just making the mc a god and have the system remove the world government for him.
One Piece : Kingdom Building System
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In the beginning the system told him that the more popular he is, the 1 point per million, 4 seconds after establishing the kingdom, 9 million people learned (thanks to someone who saw the future from the fishmen) Hashimara was summoned with all his strength at the age of 18 with max loyalty, and even though his power was limited while adapting to the One Piece world, he also found khaki except for chakra. Consider making it even stronger by using it. It was said that the island where he founded the kingdom was protected by the system by a special fog for 2 years, there were 2 more powerful than Hashimara who defeated Whitebeard, and 6 people as strong as him and 20 people as well as Marco. (I don't know, maybe it's true or false, I mostly skipped the long talk of nonsense) Just because the deal was made while another kingdom was asking for protection, giving the man information on how to manage his kingdom, how to strengthen the economy. The mc is immortal and the person they summon is also immortal đ a story full of plot holes