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Khaluchi_8941
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I was a bit uncomfortable with the first chapter because of how vulgar the male lead was. I still haven't warmed up to him yet but Vanessa? She has become my favorite character! I love the sexual tension between the two of them, I love the mafia side story and the investigations going on that shows this won't be any other love story. Keep it up!

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Justice And Desire

Jenival_Enyia

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Jenival_Enyia
Jenival_EnyiaAuthorJenival_Enyia

🥺 Oh, dear. I really tried to reduce how vulgar James was in the first chapter but I discovered that would just dampen his character. He is who he is and thrives on being that way as a shield to guide his emotions. But I really understand you though and I really appreciate your thoughts. Thank you so much, hun. 🥰☺

Jenival_Enyia
Jenival_EnyiaAuthorJenival_Enyia

Yes, before I forget, the fact that you love Vanessa just makes me squeak in my boots with excitement. I have a lot more in store where her character is concerned and I hope you love every minute of it. ☺🥰

Khaluchi_8941
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I guess I'll have to wait to see more of him then. He just might turn out to be a morally grey character

Jenival_Enyia:🥺 Oh, dear. I really tried to reduce how vulgar James was in the first chapter but I discovered that would just dampen his character. He is who he is and thrives on being that way as a shield to guide his emotions. But I really understand you though and I really appreciate your thoughts. Thank you so much, hun. 🥰☺
Jenival_Enyia
Jenival_EnyiaAuthorJenival_Enyia

Exactly! 😁 I might just take your advice. 😁😊❤🥰

Khaluchi_8941:I guess I'll have to wait to see more of him then. He just might turn out to be a morally grey character