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ChaosInvoker
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Considering English isn't your first language, you've gotten a good grasp on it so far. There's room for improvement in terms of grammar (beyond the actual grammar checker, Grammarly's got lots of articles on common writing mistakes and how to avoid them), especially where the comma splices, tense consistency and punctuation use is concerned, but it's nothing that a good proofread and rewrite can't fix. You're off to a good start, all things considered, so just keep at it.

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