Review Detail of ThePotatoKing in Utilizing a mafia boss

Interesting story with a lot of potential! The shifting POV is a nice touch. There are a few grammar errors in each chapter... nothing that affects your understanding and its most likely due to typos imo. Author, you can try using something like Grammarly to get rid of minor errors like this, its really helpful. The ML seems to be really stone-hearted at the start, but I can see where his character is coming from. Best of luck author, I belive that you can take the story to greater heights.