Review Detail of mad_jackal in My OP Minion System in the Apocalypse

This is written by someone who has never talked to other people, only robots. There is no personality on display for any of the characters here. They act like they don't have an internal monologue and can only think about what they have already experienced. The other part to this is how characters react as if they don't feel. Such as our mc having the ability to sleep on the ground no issue. If you have never needed to sleep on the ground before, it isn't easy and it takes a while to get any sleep at all. The characters all give their backstory like they rehearse it or more like the writer put something to paper as a cheat sheet and never figured out how to make it seem natural in dialogue. Tldr it's bad don't read.