Review Detail of KinghtariusWR in Creating Artifact Spirits To Be My Wives: Am I A Blacksmith?

at first the delivery of the story kinda bad buat the idea of the story is really good. after reading more chapter i feel people can enjoy this story more. not too hard and not too lignt kind of novel. but author need to work on more little detail like world background and mc + artifact build. cant wait to read more...