Review Detail of CopyPaste1 in Teen wolf: path

your critique was very constructive... but I think you didn't realize that the plot is still in the first episode, it's only been 1 week since mc arrived in the new world... I think you are being very demanding, with something that has just started. but thanks for your opinion, and I liked the wishes, better than many stupid wishes I've seen here in the webnovel, and MC didn't intend to stay with Allisson, I'm just following with what I think is right, better than 'put the stick out and eat all female characters' and I'm new at writing. but I thank you for criticism 😜

This guy is never happy 😂, I see him giving bad reviews in a lot of fanfic/novels.

oh yea this days when somone say his opinion and thoughts is bad review.. i didn't know I should lie and say a bad story is good just so can make some kids like you happy! its ok snowflake next time i will try to give a good review to a bad story!

I don't think you understand, man, I didn't plan on making the MC date Allison, it was all spontaneous. when I thought of putting him next to the Argents, it was because of the plot that I had already thought of, I like the Argents, and it's one of my favorite characters. and the MC's family is a family of hunters! the MC himself is also a hunter! get it? I didn't put him there because of a girl, if it was like that I would have put him next to Lydia's house, who I think is much hotter and sexier! 🤣

Lol I looked at his account just cause you said that. I troll on webnovel sometimes but I legit saw that every comment is trashing on books or leaving negative reviews. I scrolled down his comments for 5 minutes and couldn’t find a single review over 3 stars.

Or u know give a good story a good review bro. I just looked at your comments and literally the past 10+ reviews have been 3 star and under. I could scroll down some more and maybe I could find a good review somewhere but dang. Find something good to read because looking at all that hate almost makes me depressed for you

You said that you're new to writing stuff. so as a guy that had been reading for 2000+ hours, i would give you some tips. don't use 'hahaha's in a sentence. for example, dont write "i guess i'm just way better than you hahaha". rather, write " i guess i'm just way better than you" he laughed. It's a small difference that would give a big impact to your stories. because when you write 'haha's in your sentence it would appear a bit cringy. second of all, don't forget to begin and end your characters sentence with "" because i've notice you forgot to end couple of your sentence with ". this small mistakes would destroy readers reading flow. there's tons of other things you could do to improve your writing, but that's for more advanced stuff. keep improving!

thanks! I always put ""but when I put it in Grammarly and then put it here, it disappears, I will try to fix that! thanks for the tip, it helped a lot!

This is normal mah dude, that's your average human. I bet 40% or more accounts are the same. It's as easy as this: people are more prone to leave comments if they disliked something rather than liked it. The middle range don't comment, the ones that like it usually don't only those that feel strongly about it do. That's why I try to go out of my way and leave a comment if I like a book. gonna read this now, the trope of a werelion has me curious :)