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CopyPaste115dCommentedCh 51 Konoha Still Has Face- CopyPaste116dCommentedCh 50 Breakfast
- CopyPaste18mthCommentedCh -1 Original Character Images
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i understand you wanna make your story more complex and maybe more interesting but to tell you the truth i think this chapter was bad one,especially when you use powers outside of the lore and original story there was no reason for the whole sister secrets and random powers especially when the story is to a early state anyways
Ch 6 Chapter 6 - CopyPaste111mthCommented
yea...nopeadios
[Gentle reminder: After recruiting a special crew member, the host will obtain 50% of their power, along with a random 20% of their skills or abilities!] - CopyPaste11yrCommentedCh 1 1. The Boy Who Eats
- CopyPaste11yrCommentedCh 1 1: A Dreadful night
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don't use Mr... destroy the immersion
The guard narrowed his eyes, scrutinizing Bryce. "Why are you arriving at Gulltown under the cover of darkness Mr. Emberwood? It's not a common sight for travelers to arrive at night." - CopyPaste11yrCommented
really 3 paragraphs just for a chest ??? your story is not bad but is like your Mc talks and talks but in the end he is saying nothing ..
At the center of the chest's lid, there was a small, ornate lock that seemed to be a work of art in itself. The lock was adorned with more gemstones, arranged in a pattern that seemed to hint at a hidden code or secret mechanism. It was evident that this lock was not only functional but also served as a piece of the chest's decorative design. - CopyPaste11yrReplied to ZE_NO_KECh 2 Chapter 1
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- CopyPaste11yrCommentedCh 2 02: The Adoption of Loki Odinson
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first 5 chapters is somewhat good plot with robotic storytelling and dialogues after chapter 6 is full plotholes and canon changes with zero reason behind them... students going to different houses and George and Fred ia a year older tham canon amd more other details change but we never know why ... the power scaling of Mc is bad..the whole blind soul seeing is waste of 10 chapters and the personality ofc is childish ... read chapter 6 and you will know... a somewhat good start but author trying to make a trolling Mc
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wtf is that trash paragraph ??
Clay decided to have a little fun and smirked before slowly nodding in a sincere voice. "Are you a cat?" he asked. There was a moment of silence before he continued, "No, no, you're not a cat. Ah, I see. You must be the transfiguration teacher of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry and an animagus to boot," he nodded as if he had just uncovered the answers to the world's secrets. "Are you here to give me my Hogwarts letter? I'm afraid I won't be able to read it as I'm currently blind." - CopyPaste11yrCommented
lol Mc lost some braincells 😅
"W-what good will that do!?" Victor exclaimed as he felt his soul get pulled away. - CopyPaste11yrCommented
why you use latin names for planets when there is no Latin yet..and cleary the planet can not have the names like that?? nevermind!
Hypnos thoughtfully thrummed his armrest. "You shall draw Kronos into outer space between Mars and Jupiter, and that shall be the battlefield," he decreed.